In Sun Beam Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
In Sun Beam
Keep ship in readiness
Let it clearly reflect on face
Make it known that you are in command
Your ambassador of your own brand
Try not to be carried away
In a strange way
That makes fool of you
People try to prove you untrue
Make strong relation
With citation
If strong resolve
And solve
People may confuse your mind
Appear harsh and unkind
But that should not make you sad
You are single soul not to be misled
It is simple race
To master in any case
That human relation is supreme
It must mushroom in sun beam
Amy Waits-Behymer11 minutes ago just my opinion not bad...
Clan Murray10 minutes ago It's very interesting but I feel left hanging in trying to understand the message of the poem Comment +1 simple thought.
potent message Kianna Morgan9 minutes ago this is good. It is very to the point. This can be seen as uncreative, but this is not true in your case. I like the meaning. I do think that the rhyming restricts your natural ability though. Overall good job. and maybe you can continue with your visualization in your first stanza. Comment +1 Rhyme is good
Mohammad Jahoorul Islam It is simple race To master in any case That human relation is supreme It must mushroom in sun beam.....what a proverbial thoughts! ! ! ! 7 hours ago · Unlike · 1
Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez, like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
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Inspirational with beautiful wording and rhyme Marianne Badalamenti11 minutes ago I absolutely love poems that make me feel better and stronger, I love this Comment 0 Awesome!
Michael J. Phantom12 minutes ago The way you form the words in such a unique combination is second to none. Very well done Comment 0 Good attempt
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Keep ship in readiness Let it clearly reflect on face