In The Garden Poem by Marcus Smith Poetry

In The Garden



When I catch you
(says the mother to her son)

You won't catch me
(says my lover to me)

(I've locked the garden,
I've hid the key)

Give it to me
(says my love to me)

I caught you!
(laughs the mother to her son)

You in crimson grab my arm,
bite my hand for the key.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 13 November 2014

This is a unique poem which leaves the reader the interest to find more secrets in the images of the garden, the key and characters - the mother and the son. Hope to read more of your poems. Thanks for posting.

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Aung Si 06 October 2012

Thoughtful poem and written in a fantastic fashion. Loved it.

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