abdul razaq

Rookie (august 10,1971 / faisalabad, pakistan)

In the lap of the sun

There are many kids (mean nine planets)
Tiny and huge
In the lap of the Sun
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  • Rookie I AM SOOO OUT OF HERE (6/19/2008 9:36:00 PM)

    Very well done my friend. Philosphy at it's best.
    Will be reading more of your fine work.
    Mel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cathleen Hodgkinson (4/6/2008 10:18:00 PM)

    Abdul- I agree with Greenwolfe 1962...'This is a work of an artist. a solid element in a universe of chaos'. I really do like your perspective with each of your writings that I've read...keep writing! Cathleen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (4/4/2008 9:57:00 AM)

    That's certainly an interesting philosophical perspective.
    This is the work of an artist. He makes use of one thing to explain another.
    A solid element in a universe of chaos.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Katherine Wiley (3/31/2008 12:59:00 AM)

    abdul-you have several poems now, and they are very nice! I liked this one. kat (Report) Reply

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