In The Mid Of The Night, Depression You Are Killing Me.. Poem by Naila Rais
In The Mid Of The Night, Depression You Are Killing Me..
I'm waiting for the very person,
Who'll wipe off my sorrows,
The one who will give me a hug,
When I have no hope left.
The one who will take me to heights,
The one who will care for me,
Or make me want to live,
When I'm ready to die.
I'm waiting for the comforting words,
Which will make me smile,
The one which will change my life,
When I have no friends but foes.
The one which will go deep into the heart,
And make me feel proud what I'm,
Or just make me forget all pain,
When I'm weeping in the dark lonely night.
I'm waiting for the very person,
Who will make me fall asleep,
In the middle of the dark nights,
When my pillow is wet with tears.
The one who will keep his hands on my
shoulder,
The one who will accompany me,
Or just try to console me,
When I sit at the corner and cry.
I'm waiting for the very person,
Who will feel my pain,
The one who will understand me,
When I'm irritating though.
The one who knows my heart,
Though I have fake smile on my face,
The one who can understand the stress,
When I have fake laugh for this cruel
world.
I'm waiting for the very person,
Who will get my big hug,
The one who will appreciate my innocence,
Whenever its time for help.
Hi Naila, A poem which is honest to the core. Only a strong heart can pen this. And, as you are strong in your heart, no depression can touch you. Keep writing and sharing with us. A very profound write for a school student. If what you have stated in your profile is true, you are blessed with abundant talent and poetic prowess. So, nurture them. Take care. All the best. On to MyPoemList and, the poet to my favourite poets. A 100 for this PURE Heart and write.
I haven't thought of it.... I was just praying to the God in the mid night for giving me some strength to bear all this....
Thnk you so much.... Yah it's true....why is everyone not believing? Stay blessed.. Naila
What is the writing from, in the large black box on the screen? Is that by you, also, Naila?
I am waiting for ......hope filled life for joy and comfort and love. tony
The one who will take me to heights, The one who will care for me, Or make me want to live, When I'm ready to die.
line 14 " I'm " DOES mean " I am" , but it sounds very strange to me used here. I really don't know what an English language 'expert' would say about it. Just in case this is/was about YOU, i'm glad it is from 2 years ago, not today. Maybe i commented 2 yrs. ago? " When I'm irritating though" i would delete " though" last line " it's" , not " its" . ;) to MyPoemList bri :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/22/2024 6:11:38 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This is a beautiful poem expressing deep feelings, which is usually done at midnight. Writing a poem is a great way of sharing pain with friends, here with poet-friends. Excellent writing!
Thanx so much your comforting words... May divine source give power... Naila