In The Not So Distant Future Poem by Dave Alan Walker

In The Not So Distant Future

Rating: 4.4


Can you hear me
can you see me
can you feel me
listen to what I have to tell you

I'm from the year 2022
don't be afraid
please don't be scared

A coalition government is trying to merge
frantically shape-shifting into something
that resembles the human form

Fragments of breath
traces of life
hearts beating

They will find you

Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 November 2018

Fragments of breath wonderfully traces life. The beauty of beating of heart can be heard when we feel the beauty. When we can see the things of righteousness. A brilliant poem is very interestingly penned.10

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Unwritten Soul 25 July 2019

Hi Dave, i am from 2025 and yeah we met at London Bridge before...remember it just last year 2024...and we talked about this..Hahahaha joking... Well dear, i just want to say your idea is really cool and amazing...hope u and all are fine there...see u in 2024 hahahaha

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Hans Vr 15 February 2019

Wonderful poem. The greed will crash down like an avalanche of snow, melting in the lake, leaving behind lofty peaks and hills filled with the greenery of wisdom and kindness.

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Bryony Sheldon 26 January 2019

I love it, despite how real this poem will become. Thank you for sharing.

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Glen Kappy 07 November 2018

Hey, Dave! After seeing your comment on my poem, So Soon, I thought I’d check out your poems and began with this one. Thinking ahead to the future is one way to keep hope alive amidst our current political situation! -Glen

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Fiadh Fida 07 November 2018

Sounds fore casting, thanks for sharing the poem

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