Naani Aslam


In The Rain - Poem by Naani Aslam

Staind in the rain
Whisper in the rain
Cry in the rain
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Comments about In The Rain by Naani Aslam

  • Rookie Shelbi H (3/12/2013 11:41:00 AM)

    I really like your poem. Even though it is short and simple, it shows the dynamics that can occur in the rain. I was just unsure if the first word of the poem is *stand or *stained. Check it for spelling. Great job! (Report) Reply

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