Treasure Island

Neela Nath


In Your Absence


I loved you as a dew-drop,
loves buds to help,
Them to bloom, a bird
loves the sky, the grass-hopper,
wishes to be one with,
nature being green like her.......
I wanted to be the morning
breeze to sway the branches,
Of the trees, the heads
of grasses, or to run along,
The meadows merrily!
Nature doesn't dance,
with the tune of lust!
So, do I! The music of
heart, the storm of
the screaming souls,
mesmerize me with the
same attraction!
In your absence in
my heart, I feel like
a withered leaf, a blank
sheet where we could write,
a poem together with the
touch of our heavenly
fingers!
In your absence, I see
the cruel eyes of an
evil spirit who wishes
to toss me in the air
to turn me into nothingness.
In your absence, I can't
be one with my mother
Nature, in your........

Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012
Edited: Monday, August 13, 2012

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  • Unwritten Soul (8/23/2012 4:31:00 AM)

    This is a screen of feeling where we may see what we felt and we feel what we have seen..lke it :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (8/17/2012 6:26:00 AM)

    ...Absence. Yes! My lips said the word in a hushed whisper, trailing when you ended. What a marvelous effect. I must try this, yes, if you don't mind me borrowing the effect. Great Write Nilakshi... Great Write! Love It!
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Wynn (8/14/2012 12:13:00 AM)

    That's really cool, magical write, please sign the guest book on my new web site betterthingsbegin.com Thanks Nilakshi. (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (8/12/2012 1:34:00 PM)

    You can put a dam across a trickle, but it will make a great lake, Someday the lake turns into the ocean
    and the dam is swept away. (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (8/12/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    Amazing and so incredibly beautiful Nila sometimes I have no words to describe the feeling but in silence heart flies and reaches its destination to tell. Love you, Kasi (Report) Reply

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