In Your Eyes Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

In Your Eyes

Rating: 5.0


When I was
So hopeless and tired
Deeply depressed and wired
A window appeared upon my cage
Incredible and wonderful
On my life stage
Someone told me
Its time to fly
Towards freedom
Blue sky
Then I found myself
In your eyes
Where I belong to
Paradise

(For M.C.)

(2008/5/19)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Onelia Avelar 19 May 2008

Bravo, Nightingale! This one is wonderful! The last lines are increadible: Then I found myself In your eyes Where I belong to Paradise

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Lynda Robson 19 May 2008

The eyes are the windows to the soul, lovely poem, so nicely put by you, Lynda xx

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Truly an amorous write, P.N....Very well constructed work....Smooth, gliding movement, like a coin tossed 'cross an icepond....Solid crafting, indeed. ~ FjR ~

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Thad Wilk 19 May 2008

Hi Shiraz! Theres no surprise that within her eyes, you have found, your paradise! Great read my friend! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards, Thad

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C.R. Clark 07 March 2009

A wonderful poem of love. Well done my friend. Richard

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Rani Turton 22 May 2008

A really lovely poem, Nightingale. Thanks for it and hope you find the paradise that you so desire.

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very beautiful. so full of love and happiness. maybe i should follow your lead and write a happy poem for once. read my poem 'Eyes' its quite simaler.

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~ Jon London ~ 19 May 2008

A trap and loving soul..set free..taking flight to happiness love it, well composed and thought out...this is fine poetry my friend. best wishes Jon

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Tsira Goge 19 May 2008

From despair to the love, only one blinking of eyes. You write perfectly and is sweet the Nightingale. ...10... Tsira

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