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In Your Eyes

When I was
So hopeless and tired
Deeply depressed and wired
A window appeared upon my cage
Incredible and wonderful
On my life stage
Someone told me
Its time to fly
Towards freedom
Blue sky
Then I found myself
In your eyes
Where I belong to
Paradise

(For M.C.)

(2008/5/19)

Submitted: Monday, May 19, 2008
Edited: Thursday, May 22, 2008

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  • C.R. Clark (3/7/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem of love. Well done my friend.
    Richard

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  • Rani Turton (5/22/2008 12:12:00 PM)

    A really lovely poem, Nightingale. Thanks for it and hope you find the paradise that you so desire.

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  • The Long Lost Dreamer of Dreams (5/21/2008 12:37:00 PM)

    very beautiful. so full of love and happiness. maybe i should follow your lead and write a happy poem for once. read my poem 'Eyes' its quite simaler.

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (5/19/2008 10:13:00 PM)

    A trap and loving soul..set free..taking flight to happiness

    love it, well composed and thought out...this is fine poetry my friend.

    best wishes
    Jon

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  • Tsira Goge (5/19/2008 3:13:00 PM)

    From despair to the love, only one blinking of eyes. You write perfectly and is sweet the Nightingale. ...10...
    Tsira

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  • Thad Wilk (5/19/2008 9:32:00 AM)

    Hi Shiraz! Theres no surprise that within her eyes, you have found, your paradise!
    Great read my friend! ! *10*! ! !
    Best regards, Thad

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/19/2008 4:09:00 AM)

    Truly an amorous write, P.N....Very well constructed work....Smooth, gliding movement, like a coin tossed 'cross an icepond....Solid crafting, indeed.

    ~ FjR ~

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  • Lynda Robson (5/19/2008 3:47:00 AM)

    The eyes are the windows to the soul, lovely poem, so nicely put by you,
    Lynda xx

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  • Onelia Avelar (5/19/2008 2:37:00 AM)

    Bravo, Nightingale! This one is wonderful! The last lines are increadible:
    Then I found myself
    In your eyes
    Where I belong to
    Paradise

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