In Your Own Shoes Poem by Susan Lacovara

In Your Own Shoes

Rating: 5.0


So you've stepped into your own shoes
and set out wandering
on unfamiliar grounds....
Tell me loved lad...what have you found?

Can you breathe a little easier
since settling there..in the morning dew
of the mountain air....
Are you safely journeying
Hopscotching from summer to fall...
Isn't it really worth it all?

To be freed and finally your own captain...
Braving the tides that shift your sail,
And treading the waves that swell...
Are you staying afloat....do tell...do tell.

So you've stepped into your own shoes
Walking and working towards your future...
Dreaming of new inventions
Not questioning intentions..
Being brand new, everyday...
Ain't that the way...

With trails to blaze
in the Autumn' s crimson haze
There's much exploring o kingdoms to come
Your work's the sum
Of all good effort...
Least not forget it...

Beloved lad, you've left our field
To gamely venture
Your sword to wield...
To pick and ponder
All you choose...
Now that you've stepped into your own shoes.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(09/17/13) For the boy who would be king, Nathaniel...while out making the world take notice of you...remember where your roots are planted. With love, for all time...I wish you Aladdin' s Lamp! Continue to dream big and chase your every quest. PEACE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Figuratively beautiful, I like the balance of every lines and stanzas

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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2014

A wonderful wish for someone new to the world at large... made special for me given it is my son's name as well... a future gift to him I will make of this pen... Thank you! ... from me and him! ;)

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