Incomplete Love Poem by Manauwer Raza

Incomplete Love

Rating: 4.5


Close your heart
and feel the mirth...

a life of sigh
a prisoner of birth...

with you always
in my mind...

where is that feeling
forgetting your kind...

'm not begging you
to love me...

'm not really asking
for this to be...

but to cherish that hope
isn't it alright...

the hope in my heart
blazing so bright...

living a life
just in dreams...

flawless love
filled with screams...

dreaming about
just holding your hand...

with you all the time
wherever you stand...

the feeling of impugn
that will for sure hurt me...

but the truth in my eyes
that you'll always see...

try keeping my eyes
from shining when they see you...

those glittering waters
when my feelings are true...

and I promise, not to smile special
when you say hello...

but will kneel to you
with all soulfulness below...

but please don't ever ask me
not to love you...

for you are just so perfect
and 'm so incomplete without you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 03 March 2015

but please don't ever ask me not to love you... for you are just so perfect and 'm so incomplete without you... A beautiful poem.................10

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Ammar Azam 22 July 2013

osum...pata nai kaha se aap itna energy gain karte ho ye sb likhne k liye., .touchd 1

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 June 2013

An extraordinary gud poem so nice to read. I hope u read mine too.

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Manauwer Raza 24 May 2013

thank you for appreciating my work :)

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Layne White 24 May 2013

Omigosh, this is amazing! (: I really like it (:

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