Indifference Poem by gul naz

Indifference

Rating: 4.8


A feeling of shiver seems to run down my spine
I still try to calm myself and say it's fine
The blood that is flowing in the streets is not mine
Who is the culprit there is no sign
Yet what can I do I am not divine
May be I will get to know when my sun will also stop to shine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 30 June 2009

A good one, you can afford to be indifferent as long as it doesn't inflicts misery on you.

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Sadiqullah Khan 03 February 2010

You can donate a pint of blood at least to save a life. Nice feelings and emtions.10

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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

a poignant poem... a great piece well written....

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Surya . 14 July 2009

really pathetic. i feel the pain.nice write/. voted10 surya

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In the journey of life I met so many characters They were different and distinctive They had wis......... lolvely it has toruched me sincerely.. the indifference cost us so much in life....10 read mine no separate ways... butterflies around and miss i miss u

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Sameer Ahmed 06 July 2009

A tale well written from the day we are born till the ultimate journey covering all the awkward seas we sail through in life and then the last divinity attained with an end to start a new beginning......A good symbolic poem Gul......

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