Fay Slimm

Rookie - 17 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Indispensable Awe. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Crucial to living is finding the taste
Of amazement at being alive.

.......................Thirst
For essentials like wonder, for which
....................fate
Has endowed life. Drink with delight
.........................but first
Stop at love's edge and see
...............complexity
All interwoven with season and tide.

Feel the imperative joy, which pressing
Juice into fruit, rain into cloud,
...................resides
With such happiness found
........................borne on first light
Of new dawn. Sway to rhythm
....................in motion
As time sweeps winter clean
..................to start again
Birthing underground.

................Listen to grass grow
And when found, let delight in sound
...........................remain.

Life in its abundance turns vital keys
To unlock awesome.....indispensability.


Comments about Indispensable Awe. by Fay Slimm

  • Rookie Kevin Wells (8/14/2009 2:33:00 PM)

    Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Absolutely superb, Fay. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Bob Gibson (8/2/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Your metaphors, have opened doors of similarities
    your description of your views on life, you exemplify with ease

    we all should stand back for a while and smell the coffee
    brilliant Fay, what a wonderful mind you have. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pete Love (8/2/2009 8:32:00 AM)

    beautifully done...touching and rich.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Herbert Nehrlich2 (8/2/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Excellent work. However, remember that workshop we did some time ago?
    We may need a refresher soon.

    Hxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (8/2/2009 7:00:00 AM)

    lovely fay i would like to move there (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ian Bowen (8/2/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    Fay, nice piece of work. Most enjoyable read.10/10
    Regards,
    Ian (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 2, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 19, 2009


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