Indispensable Awe. Poem by Fay Slimm

Indispensable Awe.

Rating: 4.5


Crucial to living is finding the taste
Of amazement at being alive.

.......................Thirst
For essentials like wonder, for which
....................fate
Has endowed life. Drink with delight
.........................but first
Stop at love's edge and see
...............complexity
All interwoven with season and tide.

Feel the imperative joy, which pressing
Juice into fruit, rain into cloud,
...................resides
With such happiness found
........................borne on first light
Of new dawn. Sway to rhythm
....................in motion
As time sweeps winter clean
..................to start again
Birthing underground.

................Listen to grass grow
And when found, let delight in sound
...........................remain.

Life in its abundance turns vital keys
To unlock awesome.....indispensability.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 02 August 2009

Fay, nice piece of work. Most enjoyable read.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Kevin Wells 14 August 2009

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Absolutely superb, Fay.

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Bob Gibson 02 August 2009

Your metaphors, have opened doors of similarities your description of your views on life, you exemplify with ease we all should stand back for a while and smell the coffee brilliant Fay, what a wonderful mind you have.

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Pete Love 02 August 2009

beautifully done...touching and rich....

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Herbert Nehrlich2 02 August 2009

Excellent work. However, remember that workshop we did some time ago? We may need a refresher soon. Hxx

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Carol Gall 02 August 2009

lovely fay i would like to move there

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