Ink Poem by David Darbyshire

Ink



They'er not very clever
when they need a pencil
and an eraser,
cause they can't think
when writing with ink

So type away
write your poems all day
there is lots of space
and there is always the 'Backspace'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Leclerc 27 April 2006

Cute, David! I write with ink and the thing is, I like seeing all the changes - scratched out words/restored words, etc. It's really good looking back at the first rough draft and however many others, if any, between that and the final version. Of course, after posting, I still find the need to edit! ... Thanks for the funny today!

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Patricia Gale 27 April 2006

Thank goodness for white out! Clever Dave! Patricia

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Mike Finley 27 April 2006

I use a pen - you just scratch everything out you don't like, and whatever's left, is what you've got. Sweet poem, David!

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