Innocence Poem by vamsi krishna

Innocence

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As the baby wakes frm his bed
he sees the world arnd him
wonders what is here and why it is,

he moves on to see things,
less complex to understand what is goin on
he understands only two emotions of love and pain
both of which stay with him in loss and gain

he conveys evrything in laughter and cry
like we grown ups have never bothered to try
the way he is and his innocence makes me wonder
ah wht a day to live afterall to see a boy of such wonder

his evry movement is observed with such care
tht even people dying want to glare
his laughter is such a medicene
tht any disease can be cured by it

aryan



the continuation to this is THE EARLY YEARS' ANOTHER POEM FOLLOWED'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alyssa Marquardt 30 May 2009

I love these lines: he conveys evrything in laughter and cry like we grown ups have never bothered to try that poem is amazing and I agree with ur thoughts. very good poetic devices too I love it

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Keshav Prasad 30 May 2009

wonderful...but why do you use short forms in words, text a lot with mobile huh! maybe? , would be good if words are complete but its just my suggestion...i dont like to advice! ...keep posting :)

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Priyanka Bhowmick 30 May 2009

this is a lovely one. babies r innocent n dats wat captures people.

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Mona Martinez 30 May 2009

very true. i loved the way you said it. :)

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very true...a baby is a delight and you have captured its innocence

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