Inside Me Poem by Augustus Carter

Inside Me

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Inside me its dark come take a look
you will see there is nothing there
even the walls are all bare and blank
the room is completely empty
the pool of my soul drained to nothingness
so if you want to swim in my soul fill it please
I tried to fill it on my own but while feeling it just drained
and if you want to live in my heart you will have to furnish it
for thieves have came and taken everything and left me empty inside
you can try and see through the window of my heart but it is boarded over
for I have sealed myself within darkness
so if you would like to see me come through my barriers
find my heart and see my feeling see the true me
so for you who come to try and find me please don't bring pain or loneliness
and when you come you will need to furnish the inside of me for it is empty and bare remove the boards of the windows refurbish me make me whole again but as you look at me now you will see nothingness so hopefully when you come you will bring me back bring out the real me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rhiannon Scase 23 January 2008

Truly amazing! I felt the pain as I diverted my eyes from one line to the next, You reached a part in me with your words that I thought could never be reached! You need not to be 'furnished' as you should be made whole by your talent! Loved it! Rhiannon*

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So many ways to hollow out your soul, to depress the spirit and leave an aching emptiness, you really captured the pain with your words.

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