! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Insomnia! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Insomnia! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 2.9


Destroyed the physical
Evidence of our love;
What to do with
Ones etched in memory?


Like an insomniac
Who lies wide awake
In bed,
I too dread the
Night…

Wish could delete
At the click of a key.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 04 September 2009

awesome simile poem...nice write.....10

0 0 Reply
Lynda Robson 04 September 2009

A very deep write Mamta, I enjoyed reading it very much, 10 Lynda xx

0 0 Reply
Sandra Martyres 04 September 2009

This piece has so much depth - it definitely makes the reader think....great poem 10

0 0 Reply
Rakesh Bedi 05 September 2009

To me, this is a beautiful poem projecting pain, pain and pain! ! !

0 0 Reply
Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Nicely finished Welk done

0 0 Reply
Ranjit Ravindran 07 November 2009

There are times when we feel memory is a curse...its a one way traffic into the brain..it can't be drained out. Wish somebody could find a way to erase memory as we liked. lovely write ma'am. 10 Ranjit.

0 0 Reply
Anand Madhukar 10 September 2009

A crrispy write which leaves an impact. Would you be kind enough to read my Sleeping Dogs which is similar in theme and flavour?

0 0 Reply
Raj Nandy 07 September 2009

A touching short poem! But as a Doc. I hasten to suggest,12 to 15 drops of Rauvolfia Serpentina before going to bed, if you want a good night's rest! Thanks for sharing! -Raj

0 0 Reply
Sandra Fowler 06 September 2009

Thank you for your beautiful art. This one hurt you into poetry. If one could only click and the night would disappear, it would be a comfort sometimes...Take care. Kind wishes, Sandra

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success