Destroyed the physical
Evidence of our love;
What to do with
Ones etched in memory?
Like an insomniac
Who lies wide awake
In bed,
I too dread the
Night…
Wish could delete
At the click of a key.
A very deep write Mamta, I enjoyed reading it very much, 10 Lynda xx
This piece has so much depth - it definitely makes the reader think....great poem 10
To me, this is a beautiful poem projecting pain, pain and pain! ! !
There are times when we feel memory is a curse...its a one way traffic into the brain..it can't be drained out. Wish somebody could find a way to erase memory as we liked. lovely write ma'am. 10 Ranjit.
A crrispy write which leaves an impact. Would you be kind enough to read my Sleeping Dogs which is similar in theme and flavour?
A touching short poem! But as a Doc. I hasten to suggest,12 to 15 drops of Rauvolfia Serpentina before going to bed, if you want a good night's rest! Thanks for sharing! -Raj
Thank you for your beautiful art. This one hurt you into poetry. If one could only click and the night would disappear, it would be a comfort sometimes...Take care. Kind wishes, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
awesome simile poem...nice write.....10