M Rene Riel

Rookie (July 18,1961 / Plattsburgh New York USA)

Into The Stillness - Poem by M Rene Riel

Stillness,
fades from an
awakening memory,

sounds return
wheels humming
waving quietly

into the nights air
into the cool September air
amidst the darkness

tears began to fall
like rain
Looking into the

fading stillness
the border quickly
fades,

into the darkness,
into the stillness,
into September's chill

Before drifting off
to sleep
at the September crossing

I said, 'good-bye'
stillness now gone
as the memory returns


Comments about Into The Stillness by M Rene Riel

  • Rookie M Rene Riel (3/18/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    Hello Rene,
    Just thought I would let you know your work is great! !

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  • Rookie ngaio beck (7/19/2008 4:56:00 PM)

    There is a sweet sadness, offers a tender warmth. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 15, 2008



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