Brian McMurdo

Rookie (27 October 1991 / Weston Super Mare)

Invisibility? - Poem by Brian McMurdo

Oh the irony
Of invisibility
Many people wish
To be unseen like a fish
But in reality
They’d rather people see
For when they are not there
People talk and share
Truth and gossip hurt
Make them feel like dirt
But what hurts the most
When they’re like a ghost
Is that people don’t see they’ve gone…


Oh the irony
That many people wish
For invisibility
To be unseen like a fish
But in reality
When they’re not there
They’d rather people see
For people talk and share
Truth and gossip hurt
But what hurts the most
And makes them feel like dirt
Is when they’re like a ghost
People don’t see they’ve gone…


Comments about Invisibility? by Brian McMurdo

  • Rookie Madly In Love (3/19/2007 6:35:00 AM)

    i like the furst peom better but there both good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 18, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, February 4, 2011


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