Invisible Poem by E.A. England

Invisible

Rating: 5.0


do you see me standing here?
or am i invisible again?
its so hard to hide these tears
they always come out in the end

the way you make me think you care
about my shattered dreams
then you leave me its not fair
how make believe it seems

i see you standing over there
having fun with her
its way too much for me to bare
you've made my guesses sure

i thought you were the one for me
the way you made me feel
but now im left alone you see
with so much to conceal

cant bare the thought of moving on
my souls still stuck on you
i thought we shared a special bond
i guess i'll make it through

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Newlash 16 July 2008

great read keep up the good work!

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 18 July 2008

Touching love poem...........

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Kira Williams 25 November 2009

wow, and here i thought i was the only one who knew what this is like, im glad to see that there are more than just me...

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Patrick A. Martin 01 September 2009

Never fear Elizabeth ninty's coming up better things ahead... just stay away from them old guys.10 AGAIN

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James B. Earley 18 August 2008

There will be another bus...along....with lot more comfortable seats! Best wishes.

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Anna jonson 03 August 2008

very beautiful and sad keep going & good luck

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 July 2008

heart wishful laching on to the love of glimpse love seem to be befuddled by the shadow over the gleams....................very eloquently orchestyated, wonderful y luscious,10+, thanks for sharing

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