Invisible Walls Poem by S. I. Rednow

Invisible Walls



To walk away hurts, even cuts to the heart
Gloom hung like a fog after dawn
Our invisible walls did tear us apart
When we're not being heard we move on

It's clear to me now how it's always unfair
When feelings are kept in a vault
Compelled to be cold and pretend not to care
While we're looking for where to put fault

Though likely I paid for what others did you
There was reason to give it my best
But we no longer talked, what else could we do
It was time that we put it to rest

We were water and oil, seems we just wouldn't mix
So what did our time really mean
Your friendship is vital, I do much to fix
It's important that I can come clean

Tuesday, September 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Therapeutic. Relationships are work.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Pintu Mahakul 16 September 2014

Our invisible walls did tear us apart to we were water and oil, nice expression is given. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.

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S. I. Rednow

S. I. Rednow

Swindon, England
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