persian khushi

Rookie - 103 Points (kashmir)

Irresponsible - Poem by persian khushi

Speed!
Weathered
Slippery roads
High speed
Popped a wheel
Tyre burst
Screech driver shocked
Trying to stabilize the car
Breaks screech
Screams from side-walk
Collision
Pile up crash-crash
Glass shattered scattered
Screams squashed fleas
Running feet
Police sirens
Ambulance
Cars stopping
Check out this metal mess
1,2,3 car pile-up crash
Painful moans
Face bashed
In smashed windscreen
Nose broken
Blood oozing
H-e-l-p!
Petrol running
Race against time
Bystanders praying
Rescue workers
Jaws of life!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

02/10/12

Comments about Irresponsible by persian khushi

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (10/3/2012 12:15:00 PM)

    It is where responsibility ends as an example (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (10/3/2012 12:12:00 PM)

    Drunk and and egoistic driving when one gets a car loosing all balances (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 3, 2012



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