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Mailrangam Visvanathan Venkataraman

Rookie - 22 Points (28/08/1959 / Trichy, India)

Is Rebirth On Earth A Myth?


Rebirth may be really true
In my most humble view
This concept is not new
Another birth is surely due

If sins all methodically commit
God will not simply leave it
To escape, God will not permit
Proper reasons, one must submit

If answers are not satisfactory
Suffering is made obligatory
Hell is a punishment factory
Rejecting our cock and bull story

A tiniest creature moves
God's presence, this proves
Life to it, God approves
Its life, a small touch removes

In cruelty, humanity excels
To kill, they conduct rehearsals
They carry hatred in body vessels
On graves, they build their castles

Millions of creatures exist
Invariably, death, all resist
Though God and Nature assist
To sin, circumstances insist

There is surely a hidden law
Which is balancing every flaw
It arrives at a justifiable draw
Justice Triumphs' is a holy saw

A new body, every soul acquires
Certain conditions, this requires
About a life, God enquires
Soul is shifted when life expires

Here soul has no voice
Everything is God's choice
Lives are to God toys
He will punish bad boys

Soul only makes the movement
If it does any wise improvement
It is given a nice compliment
By way of a rich increment

God knows how to interchange
Proper placement, He can arrange
This technique is not at all strange
God does finely a perfect exchange

Souls cannot at all protest
They are given a pucca test
They must do their level best
Via end God will at last arrest

Soul is on Earth permanent
A regular God-sent visitant
God's watch is consistent
Why souls are by God sent?

This question is unanswerable
But souls are by God transferable
This concept is very reasonable
This seems to be highly sensible

Perfect Justice is provided
Everything is by God decided
After in a body, a soul has resided
To enter another body, it is guided

A soul is by god monitored keenly
Whether it has lived very cleanly
Or if it has behaved very meanly
Will be judged by God mainly.

Submitted: Saturday, August 08, 2009

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