Take my world away,
Stop all that pray.
Cause theres no need,
Since no-one can watch us read.
Watch us sleep or say,
‘theres no need to pray'
Even though the poem is a short write, i do believe you managed quite well to deliver the meaning in a well execututed way. I do love the words you choose. When you have only a few short lines certain things are so important and I do think you hit them all wonderfully. I especially love the ending lines. To me the opening is paramount to grabbing the readers attention, which you did. Then the ending you nailed with having the person wanting more. A lovely poem, well constructed and delivered.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The Lord reigns. You are a living testimony