Is This God? Poem by Neela Nath Das

Is This God?

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Before coming to the screen,
I don't know what to write
Or, at all it'll spring
Out from the experience
Of dull days or not.
With a vacant head without
Any idea, I keep my
right hand on the mouse.
Words upon words with
Emotion form a thought.
Thus, it starts,
And ends too.
What happens in between
Is beyond my knowledge.
Is this God,
Who excites our
Power of imagination?
After writing every poem,
I feel this just
As someone made me write!

Sunday, June 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: God
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 29 June 2014

I don't know who inspire you to write but you are a wonderful writer. Liked it.

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Chuy Amante 30 June 2014

I feel the same! It's God I blame! I don't know from where it does come can't be me, I'm really dumb! thanks, lovely write! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 30 June 2014

Neela, then next time onwards I will not tell a beautiful poem once again from your pen. I think I need to change my sentence, what should I tell....let me just think...(Kidding) . Yes, Neela I too believe there is some force hidden which help us in doing it. Have you ever sensed in your life, you had a miraculous escape any time. Yes, there is definitely a force which guide us, but when our thoughts overpower us we cannot catch those force. While writing especially along with a certain flow the words comes one by one, but if we miss one word then we loose the whole poem. I loved your theme and your poem is beautiful.

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Yes I believe so.......A super hand behind that made extraordinary writing possible...............Neela.......a great piece

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Dinesan Madathil 29 June 2014

This is also one of the gods whom man visualises about.. Some see him as one who helps them to smile a lot and many see him as one who never rubs off their tears. He is man`s sole property for imaginary manipulations. Jawadji, many of the writers ober the PH write the poems straight away type things on the computer and that is the way some poets happen to deliver not so well. Anyway be writing your poems Neelaji and Jawadji.....

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Akhtar Jawad 29 June 2014

I also don't use paper and pen. I write my poems directly on computer, sometimes I write directly on PH and sometimes I write it it on word. It's easy to edit and change the lines. You have rightly said that the good thoughts come from God and bad thoughts come from evil. Both are present in us.

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