Is This The Only Way? Poem by Mary Amrutha

Is This The Only Way?

Rating: 3.0


Is this the only way to
forget all your sorrows?

Is this the only way to
control your anger?

Is this the only way to
forget your past?

I don't think that the things
you do now are right,
I don't think that this is a
better hide out for you.

I may be not having
any rights on you
to tell this,
but I'll keep on telling this.
No matter you like it or not.

It doesn't make you bad,
I know that you are not bad
but it's of no use,
what you do now kills you,
I am telling you this
because you are like a brother to me

Don't tell that I am a kid
and I don't know a thing,
may be I am to you
but what I am telling
is the TRUTH...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to some one who I consider as my brother.
We haven't seen each other nor talked in person but I feel a kind of affection while talking to him and this poem is for you my brother and I hope you know what I am talking about
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 27 February 2014

'Don't tell that I am a kid and I don't know a thing, may be I am to you but what I am telling is the TRUTH... ' This a good attempt, at telling a brother through a poem, the truth, which he won't otherwise listen to. Well done.

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Calvin Curdle 18 November 2013

I liked the way u hid the truth from me. It creates suspense.

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Mary Amrutha

Mary Amrutha

Ernakulam, kerala, India
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