It Fascinates Me Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It Fascinates Me

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It fascinates me always
Whenever see the woman on the way
While carrying the child in both the hands
I dream about happy world and dreamland

Is this the world so cheerful?
The women make it even more beautiful
"For every success man find woman"
So much is the contribution for man

Especially females are kind and caring
Where as man are adventurous and daring
Yes he finds heavenly refuge at home
Where she awaits for him to welcome

I have advocated always and still do
As they are capable of and very true
To the cause and dedication
So as to cement the bond and relation

Child adds beauty to existing relation
There is so much joy with elevation
It has something to do with tension free zone
Person forgets everything when outside work is done

Can you see there joy on her face?
Who can evaluate the quantum of happiness?
You pay millions but get nothing in return
Such is the role of woman in turn

I loved this picture not because of some attachment
But you can see natural expression at right moment
The child provides us the clue as to how she must be respected?

I can see the joy on her face
As there is nothing else to trace
She has complete control over the moment
As if the chance is heavenly sent

I know this is passing reference
Yet it is our future with nice presence
We may be given certain additional responsibility
But that all can be left to the grace of almighty

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It fascinates me always Whenever see the woman on the way

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SoldierBlue Blue Heya Hasmukh....Mother's the treasure of all future people...to be prized for their gifts of such beauty...wombman....the reality of all such possibilities...thank you for this great posting...SoldierBlue 2 hours ago · Like

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Patricia Tate I like it very much, and I agree with Kaul's comment, it is indeed a lovely line. 10 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Gail Desautels no problemo... thank you I am in complete agreement, but we must not forget that it takes two parties...1 + 1 = 1, and fathers play a very important role. Of course, yes it is true, Mother's enjoy a very special bond, and we enjoy and relish it thoroughly (most of us..) ... about an hour ago · Unlike · 1

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Gail Desautels merci encore je suis tout à fait d'accord, mais il faut les deux parties....1 + 1 = 1 :) 9 hours ago · Like

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Gail Desautels mais c'est aussi vrai, que le lien avec la mère est spéciale.... on en jouissent... :) 9 hours ago · Like

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Lela Northcross Wakely ?quantum of happiness. Nicely phrased. 8 hours ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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