It Had Begun To Rain Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

It Had Begun To Rain

Rating: 5.0


On a blue canvas,
few patches of black and grey.
thats how
the sky is looking today.

Near that far end,
sun has almost set.
red and orange rays bend
from amidst the clouds.

The sky seems larger today,
why?
is this magic of the grey?
it may.

Interrupted into my thoughts,
the whistle of the rail.
i almost didnt noticed
it had begun to rain.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
just penned down sitting on rooftop
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 14 July 2013

A great poem. We've had an heat wave where I am.

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David Wood 15 July 2013

This is a lovely poem, short and sweet. I think the shorter poems are the best.

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Shania K. Younce 05 October 2013

Well I like it. Sometimes a poem might be direct. Even if the poem is not your best write it any way. I love to read. Their your feelings. If just keep writing you'll better or worse. That's just life. A nice poem.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 28 July 2013

I for one loved it dear Jenie, I'm not one of the best poets on this site but I enjoyed it. keep writing. Siya_! !

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Anamika Jalan 17 July 2013

nice poem but i didnt like it at all as its approach is so contamparaly and out of link

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Shiva Mosazadeh 17 July 2013

hi dear... i read your poem, i think it was direct and this is not good for a poem...and decrease the authority of your poem. try to write when you are really have a real feeling about that thing, , , because you should not lie to yourself, especially in poet! be successful.............

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Survi Sharma 17 July 2013

nicely done a gud poem to share

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