It Is Your Smile… Poem by Hebert Logerie

It Is Your Smile…

Rating: 4.7


Woman, let me demystify you,
So I can see why I love you
So much.
Let me search:
The curves, the preserves,
The gardens and the reserves,
So I can understand
Why every second
That you flash in my memory,
The chemical formula changes in my body.

Turn around;
You're safe and sound.
Let me examine you from head to toes:
Touch your nose,
Cover your cheeks,
Do some tricks,
Try to fake it,
Walk, run, stop and sit.
Oh! I'm beginning to see:
It is your smile
That drives me crazy;
It is your smile
That makes me feel so good.
Oh! My soul
Is engaged in a chaotic feud;
I wonder if you are the divine doll
That I dreamt of the other night.
You are out of sight.
Your smile drives me crazy,
Every day and every night,
When I am lonely,
When the sky is gloomy or bright
And when you gaze at me.

It Is Your Smile…
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shay Riggin 31 August 2009

flowed wuth ease. sounds like you were very inspired poem. i gave it a much deserved 10! ! keep writing you are doing a wonderful job!

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Nikunj Sharma 01 September 2009

short, sweet, smiling an dstimulating.............a simple freeflowing poem... liked it....please read my poem called SMILES

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Bursting with a beauty that is both rich and refreshing. Well done my friend!

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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2017

Beautiful and insightful poem. Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Lovely portrayal of the enigmatic lure of a lady's smile powerfully penned with conviction. Absolutely brilliant! Kudos Hebert, and thanks for sharing.

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Deborah Cromer 20 August 2009

Some one is SPECIAL! Nice display of affection. Choice, tender words to tell a lovely story. Written with warmth from the heart. Sweet honesty. DC

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It is a woman that makes man complete. And vice versa. The "Ardhanareeswara" concept in Hinduism…

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Congratulations, Dear Poet. This very interesting poem is selected as one of the Best Poems of Members.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 18 October 2020

Curves, preserves Gardens and the reserves. Beautiful, highly romantic

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Cowboy Ron Williams 02 July 2020

Very nice love poem. Captivating. I have five poems, but they are not activated yet. Why does it take so long for a new poet? Some of them were posted three days ago!

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Mahtab Bangalee 24 March 2020

It is your smile That drives me crazy; It is your smile That makes me feel so good. Oh! My soul..../// beautiful love is expressed here// excellent

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