It Rained On Me Poem by njiri wambui

It Rained On Me



The rain fell today, for once..
It drizzled, trinkled at first, hence
The clouds bore heavily, heaving
...and the torrent waters poured

The rain poured today,
It drizzled, trinkled at first...

The ground took all of it in
As quick and anxious as sin
It quenched it's thirst and hunger
..and gone were the pains and pangs

You see in this land, it rarely rains
Despite the vast greenwood so fertile
but then again the rain comes at times
...and after the clean washed land shines

The rain poured today,
It drizzled, trinkled at first...

Funny, dont you think..not a trace
The land finally back to its grace
Not a dropp of water in sight
...and now shines the sunlight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2008

Well done.That is a nice piece of work.Please, keep on writing that we will learn from you as well.Bye. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Max Robertson 05 December 2008

i like the rhyming idea to this poem njiri, you show quite a bit off potential. keep it up and try to develop your technique when you can Phillip xx

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Aseso Omollo 02 December 2008

I still love it.The rain as a symbol is powerful

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