It's For My Dad Poem by lina ahmad

It's For My Dad

Rating: 5.0


for my dad is all these tears
for my dad i ereased all my fears
and now i lost all my cheers
dad please come back i haven't seen you from years and years
if i cried and if i didn't what's the difference nobody hears
everyday i lie on my bed
even if you'r dead i'll never forget you
you are in my heart instead
please forgive me and forgive all the family that you led
ooooh dad come back
without you the house is dead! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Heart 27 July 2009

great touching poem! ! honestly it brought tears in my eyes! ! 10 frm me cheers

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Surya . 27 July 2009

nice and touching. beautifully worded.i hope it is not real. voted10 surya

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Aziz Alkaabi 27 July 2009

When I lost him, I thought, that evening, I was devastated. I know how you feel, child.But recalling his character and his tales and stories and how he made fun and joked about life's cruelty and that sacred stamina to fight and encounter, traits he instilled in me, I realized sooner that he will be upset to see me deteriorating in my sadness. True I miss him and you miss yours but yours must be a proud father of a proud daughter who paid him a proud tribute here. Be strong and I know you are and keep writing dear.

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Merna Ibrahim 27 July 2009

so touching and heartfelt poem, i really feel what you are feeling now, cuz i have tried this lethal feeling...(allah yrham all our fathers and corpses) you poem is really so true! ! ..write more poems u r talented..allah ysabarna..

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 27 July 2009

Really excellent mam, amazing expression..........

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Omar Ibrahim 27 July 2009

oooo! ! ! God be with you dear........ed3y laho bel rahma........allah yerhamo....this poem touched my heart that i am about to cry.......forget your sadness and defeat your fears....be strong and don't let sadness control you.....good poem you have a talent that you have to develop....write more and tell me when you write a new poem...

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Zeinab Sherif 27 July 2009

dear i can see ur tears in ur words, i can feel ur pain & ur great lack 2 ur father really it's a very sad poem.ur feeling & scream reached my heart & entered my ears.but u must have faith it's the only thing that will help u getover this & focus in ur life & future be sure that u'll be someone.agreat kind person, a caring mother, a great poetess & remember always that the coming is good, that u r not going 2 face any sad time after today.god bless u.

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