It Seems To Me Poem by Alicia Carey
It Seems To Me
It seems to me
like you forgot
I love you!
It seems to me
like you
don't love me...
It seems like your lying,
untrue, and made up...
It seems like
I'm loosing feelings for you
but maybe that's best for the both of us
more on your part though....
you know alicia? i think that if you could gather all these thoughts expressed in your new poems in a big poem and if you could put every thought in a cinquain it could be better i think....that's only a suggestion...because your poems talk about one case so your poem would be very strong like the countries if they were divided they will be weak....like the arab countries eh! :) haha
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 2:40:54 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I agree with Omar, his suggestion is good.. Good poem my friend :)