It Should Concern You Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

It Should Concern You

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It should, in no way, concern you
You have your entire share that is due
Let others go to anywhere and have downfall?
Why unnecessarily worry and respond to a call?

In which way it should bother us?
Are there not accidents taking place while traveling in bus?
Why create so much stir and fuss?
We should merely express sorry and live thus

Many may be meeting with unnatural deaths
Then also nothing affects and shakes our faith
We simply shed tears and express sorrow
Who cares for today and even for better tomorrow?

We do make sometimes money out of tragedy
Steal the articles with eyes so much greedy
Lead the way and prefer where gain is more
We witness such scenes never seen before

Hate, crime, rape and all today reign supreme
Seems they are so important and object prime
We get attracted and stay easily confused
Have no moral authority to say no and refuse

Neither they are of permanent nature
Nor do they seem to form part of future
Is there any remedy or formula for cure?
I ask to all as am not confident and sure

There is little hope in despair
Even vehicle can become serviceable after repair
We are human beings and sensitive at heart
We should not stoop so below only to look smart

Many live with hardships but show the courage
Losing no sense even after facing outrage
Love to work among poor and destitute
Consider the work as holy and substitute

It may need no extra efforts
You don’t have to part with slight comforts
Only simple desire to work for others
Pain and agony to self so others need not suffer


We unnecessarily think too much and lay a stress
Speak always lies and never admit or confess
It has become part and necessity of the day
We consider it useful to be formed in a day

If it is really essential then it must be performed
Definite idea and opinion should be formed
It should not pinch all the times everywhere
It may not help and lead you any where

Practical life and morality are two separate things
You my have will power to ride on powerful wings
You may be poor but happiness as that of kings
Still you are not able to come out of rings

Try earnestly to come out of these phenomena
There may me lot more problems and lacuna
Still we should stay aloof and out of sight
Consider it of no importance and take it light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Bhikhubhai 22 August 2009

it may not matter u at all...10

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Kant Shri 22 August 2009

it will affect you too...10

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Argum Sheth 22 August 2009

some aspects must concern u too....10

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Natasha Rathod 23 August 2009

for something u should not concern at all...10

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Jayant Manik 23 August 2009

nothing shakes our faith....10

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Antonio Liao 22 February 2010

The 10th paragraph, struck the best of the poem....determined to struggle of what life meant to be....excellent concept...a 10 +++++, God bless....

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Ken E Hall 09 November 2009

inn Europe USA Australia and around the world death by motor car abuse is mind boggeling at the hands of drunks speedsters, on the phone drivers it is a war and who cares--- big bucks if you had a photo of Princess Dianne's car -cannot see a light at the end of the tunnel-well done poem hasmukh +++++++++10 regards

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Suwarna Patil 25 August 2009

Hate, crime, rape all reign supreme Seems they are important and object prime.....10

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Kamli Kamal 25 August 2009

It may need no extra efforts You don’t have to loose even slight comforts.....10

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Saroj Davde 24 August 2009

should, in no way, concern you.....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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