Eman Elbadawi


It was a World/ Titanic


It was a world
That we once lived in
And it was shattered
Like once our heart within
Was shattered into two
One was me
One was you
We prayed and prayed
In fear and pain and panic
Oh God
Make us one again
One for me
For my sake
Peace
Again I'll make
I'll make you two
One for me
One for you

And we were made one
Once more
Before
The world was shattered!

Submitted: Thursday, December 17, 2009
Edited: Thursday, December 17, 2009

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Eman Elbadawi (12/30/2009 8:00:00 AM)

    Many Thanks
    The secret is that I write from the bottom of my heart and sincerely; sometimes I look to my poetry and ask myself: who has written this and how? It is the secret of creation and I write pen to paper; thanking God for His givings to me and that He has given me more than I expected more than I asked and more than I deserve

    God Bless Our World East & West and cure The Deadly Misunderstandings..... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 963 Points Saadat Tahir (12/29/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    eman...this is very nice
    indeed ur sentence...let the poetry speak...correct! ! !

    very nice
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (12/25/2009 12:03:00 PM)

    'll make you two
    One for me
    One for you, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , wonderful write ingenious by imagery, yet passionate prayer for in unison,10++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Eman Elbadawi (12/19/2009 9:06:00 PM)

    God Bless
    Prayers of the Saints Joseph and all guide our way in All Judaism Christianity and Islam tears of saints wash our sins away.... Did Mary the Virgin show really in the lower sky above the Temple.... And what a beauty she is.... sha is light incarnated..... Merry Christmass and Happy new year 2010 full of balance harmony success and joy.... Heleliuia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Eman Elbadawi (12/17/2009 5:56:00 AM)

    (inspired by the great film) (Report) Reply

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