It Was All A Dream Poem by Esther Obeng

It Was All A Dream

Rating: 4.5


it was all a dream,
you opened your arms so wide,
to let me in
i could see your angelic eyes,
shining with happiness
your nose almost touching mine
your hands on my wrist
i could hear your heart beat
i could smell your fresh breath
my lips was almost touching
yours,
but then,
i waked up that moment,
and realise
it was all a dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 09 July 2014

Unfulfilled desires play such games in a dream. You have beautifully described it in a poem.

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Patricia Grantham 19 August 2013

Seemed to be a dream of love and passion. To bad it was all in a dream. Maybe it will be continued. Nice write.

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Rajendran Muthiah 09 January 2012

A nice poem to read and enjoy! Wonderful dreamy melody to ring in ears!

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Uche Chidozie 29 December 2011

Nice one, but something is attached to that dream in real life, maybe what ever...

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