It Was Just Too Much Poem by Heartbeat Terrorist
It Was Just Too Much
Together is what she wants
Apart is what they are
Love is what she asks for
So he shows her the door
Attention is what she seeks
Ignorance is what he gives
Backstabbed is how she feels
But still her lips stay sealed
Weak is how she stays
Pain is what he inflicts
Slowly her heart brakes into pieces
She knows this pain never seises
She wanted love
and so he left
Without him by her side
Her entire life soon became a lie
With knives, and pills and razors alike
She finally decided to take her life
Wow! ! ! The Relationship Of Mine That Just Ended LAst Saturday Night Was Like That To Bare Ends Its Really Touching For Me =(
I can relate fully. This poem speaks everything I feel and know. You deserve medals for this!
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4/24/2024 6:14:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
This poem requires some work. It says important things but it says them too many times throughout the poem. Really, the poem is a bit too long.There are too many words repeated needlessly. I gave it a six. GW62