Its Raining A Beautiful Song Of Spring Poem by Angelic(Annie) Female

Its Raining A Beautiful Song Of Spring

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Its raining, i see a rainbow for me, awaits
crystal droplets pour from the heavens gates
the orchids, roses, grass beds are glistering
the blossomed scene, a dancing me, reminiscing

Its raining, i feel the warmth of the sun
its leakage of rays, in golden shower has begun
darling buds of may, my deep anticipation
the gentle breeze ignites my tender passion

Its raining, i hear wind chines in the distance
buzzing bees, butterfly's, the pleasures immense
coupled birds of paradise join me in chorus
serene and mellow, some lyrics so melodious

Its raining, i smell the crisp earths crust
the nurturing grass lands, the breeze airiest
crushed out of flowers in spring that bloom
the essence, the fragrance of rich perfume

Its raining, never have i savored, so tantalizing
a scrumptiously prepared meal of picturesque spring
ingredients of crystals, rainbows, sun rays and ecstasy
blended with fragrance, bees and blossoms in serenity

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Late Sunrise 04 May 2009

Well written, all your senses seem to enjoy the rain..

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Sam Stough 05 May 2009

very pretty write indeed. the use of the senses were greatly expressed, keep writing!

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Omar Alsadeq 05 May 2009

Very nice with the rain and stuff. Keep up the good work. It awesome

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what a beautiful song..truly genuine and brilliant!

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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2009

Yes, a scrumptiously prepared meal of picturesque spring ingredients of crystals, rainbows, sun rays and ecstasy blended with fragrance, bees and blossoms in serenity a wonderful weave of sweet soft and soothing inagery from Nature. A superbly composed poem that brings out the poet in you. CP

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Catrina Heart 10 May 2009

truly awesome written poem.....Well thought out! ! ! Thanks..........

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Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

dreamy, captivating, magical... wow

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Christian Hayes 07 May 2009

i love it, its wonderful you captured the senses very well thoughout

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Marvin Brato 06 May 2009

Brilliant write, it touches the soul!

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