Joint Campaign Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Joint Campaign

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I gave you chance
To live peacefully at once
You were adamant and unrelenting
I feel bad for commenting even

I wish you have nice innings
Spend your lavish and luxurious evenings
You shall not be here again
I will carry on with my own pain

Life needs to be pulled
But should not fooled
It is joint campaign
One should forget and regain

Life has been made hell
I did not want to spell
But alas! I could restrain
With few words of pain

You were unreasonable
With creation of troubles
I could adjust fairly
But not with heart really

You were irresponsible
Towards life's struggle
The children were getting no attention
I was worried about our relation

You were spending time
Somewhere with friends at odd time
It was proving disastrous
You had distinction of living dubious

Wednesday, August 20, 2014
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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Beautiful poem. Beautiful lines...... You were spending time Somewhere with friends at odd time It was proving disastrous You had distinction of living dubious......... I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

It's gonna time to join a campaign like this. It is worth the effort the time! Robert Alicias5 hours ago well done for a good recipe Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

Something deep? Mike Marty5 hours ago You appear to perhaps be writing this as a release of inner turmoil, being safe not to assume. On this notion i will only applause you. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2014

emotional, heart-filled, sad, depressing Tracy Snow5 hours ago this poem is emotional and heart-filled at the same time.it makes me think of a relationship that when down hill do to bad choices.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 August 2014

I gave you chance To live peacefully at once

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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