Journey Of Love! ! ! Poem by pallvi sharma

Journey Of Love! ! !

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Love knocked at heart….

Heart of an old man,

“Can I stay here for a day or so? ”

asked love.

Oh! No No…

Its home of experiences…

Combined with a lesson or more,

Its home of dreams which never became fact…

Home of all the tacts! ! ! No No...

Love knocked at heart….

Heart of a businessman.

“Can I stay here for a day or so? ”

asked love.

Oh! No No…

am already falling short of space for my money,

My competitors add up more to the fuzz.

My partners and rivals always bug me up! ! ! NO NO…

Love moved ahead to find another heart…

Heart of a student.

“Can I stay here for a day or so? ”

asked love.

Now? ? Oh! No No…replied student.

My heart is preoccupied with my pans and my parent’s expectations.

I have to keep track of all the trends, to keep my head up before my friends.

Love moved ahead and became happy to get lover’s heart..

He decided to walk in without knocking…

Love was happy but that smile was short lived.

There he met a huge cloud of expectations,

Heart wasn’t beating but thudding with all the wordy quest and pain! ! !

There wasn’t any spec of rest,

Heart wanted to get the best without moving ahead a ingle step…

Love ran away from that heart and finally decided that now he cant get any space to live….

Suddenly a sweet voice called up, ”hey Love! Cummon in.

I know am smaller then al the previous hearts you met but would you mind staying here for a day or more?

Love was surprise, accepted he invitation and stepped in…

Love was astonished to see the celebration going on within.

Care was at its swing,

Good wishes welcomed him with open arms along with cool breeze of charm…

Prayer and care were busy in managing the place.

Heart was overwhelmed with positive waves.

It was the heart of a child.

Love happily joined the crowd with broad smile.

But, all of them were asked to eave after short while.

Because, now the child was grown up…

Became student and had to be a professional, lover and all…

To follow the same old trend.

Love was homeless again but wished, ” if ever a child would grow without replacing celebration with all the tasteless tracts? If ever someone will be able to make a complete blend? ”

The love decide no to move on …the person will find me if anyone ever want…he thought! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neha Aradhye 15 October 2008

i must say something different... love seeking for a place in the heart of an old man, buisnessman, student, and then a child....in a descending order... i liked that! ! :)

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premji premji 15 October 2008

lovely composed poem *10*

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