Journey Of Tear Poem by Asif Baloch
Journey Of Tear
From an eye a tear just shed
Traveling through the mist
To sleep in earthly bed
On the way it carried dreams
Dropping down with hushed screams
Dreams and screams of loneliness
Feelings of stumbling and falling thoughts
Thoughts thou full of emptiness
Only few words that vibrates
Words put lashes on tormented soul
Whipping away the hope of love
Forcing heart to flood out gold
Gold as white and transparent inside
Reaching and climbing up above high
Towards the door of sadness and denial
Yearning to fall down to earthly womb
To be destroyed, vanished and fall sleep
For eternity
Tears are words of emotions...sadness and loneliness were magically penned in the earth's crust, digging into the core...a 10.
tears has defiant meaning joy/sad...emotionally that could be..in other things might be differently...a mind boggling sometimes...nice concept..A10 Ency Bearis
Tears are essential part of life and as life moves tears come along... Again a wonderful piece, well crafted and adorned with purity of tormented emotions... Regards, Kamran
marvellous aijaz...im impressed greatly by what youve accomplished here...it is indeed very very well formed....well done aijaz..standing ovation.10!
O poet i m sorry 4 i m 2 l8 2 reply u had captured the precious feelings of mines gr8 job
the journey of a 'poem tear'...though sadly emotional the journey is for peace to eternity...good piece
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Fine imagery penned! truely a piece of art! ......10+