Journey To The Castle In The Blue Sky Poem by Vincent Dali

Journey To The Castle In The Blue Sky

Rating: 5.0


Vanity hits my Face
All around this ugly Place
Why can’t I see?
I understand through all of your eyes
Yet, it is the Fog of the Night
That tends to blind my Soul a-Flight

High above the clouds, the mind is away
And the Sun can’t come out to play
The blackest heart has felt a soul
Beautiful eyes tell it all (That should be told)
I can’t see my mind
Yet, I understand the thought of mankind

I am only human, so are you, so high
Open minds fly open souls on cloud nine
Divine forgive the sins
Let loving hearts befriend
I am gone to the castle
Artistic, High Clouds see, yet only through the mind’s eye

Let your eyes not cry
Or minds die
For I don’t even know if mine’s alive
Yet, it keeps me sane
High on paradise to kill the pain
Clocks ticking, tocking in a brain
I’ll fill my eulogy with poetic rhyme sure to make all cry
Today and Tomorrow I’m high on living high (In a castle in the blue sky)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber Vasquez 07 April 2009

I love this poem though I dont really understand it, but thats what makes it so Interesting.

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 April 2009

I really didn't understand the meaning of this at all. There was a mention of the mind and the soul and cloud nine. However, I found it impossible to understand how they interacted to make a certain point. Therefore, to me, it had no meaning. Sorry. I cannot therefore comment on something I don't understand. GW62

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Callie Valentine 02 April 2009

Really beautiful! :)

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Ana Zaldivar 01 April 2009

this poem was a real mellody in my mind.. is so beautiful so well written.. like it ver much: D 10++

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