Joyfully Free Poem by Elayna LeSabre

Joyfully Free

Rating: 5.0


Grant me a place
away from farce
Singsong themes
designated roles
Well proscribed
regardless of truth

Save me a space
I don't need to fight
Authentic peace
a genuine path
True to myself

I'm running my race
for goals that I choose
Responsible still
lofty ideals
Knowing who I am
I'm joyfully free

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 30 December 2009

Wonerful Elle..! ! just another hit from you. :)

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Nikunj Sharma 22 December 2009

I see voice of humanity here in all the stanzas 1. Gran tme a place away from farce...proscribed regardless of truth....isnt it that all of us want and pray for, a place that's away from clutter and farce and all that's unreal.... 2..we all fight for a place, our space whether physical or spiritual....the stanza brings it out clearly. I am amazed at how you connect with that larger self while writing your poems.... 3. final blow....this really touches the heart, all words stand out and deliver a meaning that's so pure and worthwhile....the ultimate nirvana of knowing who we are.....and being joyfully free........... the poems is almost a prayer to me...i can only say Amen

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