Judgment Poem by M.J. Lemon
Judgment
Is this a fence or
Am I imprisoned for life?
I plead for parole.
First time I've seen Kumarmani use the word wow. That makes it more impressive. Daniel Brick used it with a qualifier that made it even more impressive. My point being that when such great poets are using this word, you are writing at fullest potential. Which is what you've been doing all along! M.J., I can totally relate to this poem. Especially when I was a lot younger. Masterful piece worthy of Wow+++++++++!
Wow! This is very deep and wisely penned expressive Senryu. Time plead for parole. Amazing sharing really...10
To plead! Begging for mercy. With the muse of the things around you today. Nice work.
Thank you so much! And you remind me how important it is to plead with the muse...
Sometimes the struggle is so hard we do feel fenced in. Wonderful poem M.J.
Thank you so much. And yes, it is the struggle that builds the fence....as the poet said, Stone walls do not a prison make...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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A wonderful three-liner! I appreciate the sagacious comment of my friend Richard. Top score.
Many thanks, Dillip. Thank you for reading