*just A Little Mistake, Daddy* Poem by mimzy sue
*just A Little Mistake, Daddy*
He was the best human being i've ever known,
He was as gentle as a lamb
He loved me more than anybody could've
But he made me cry
I was his little princess
I still would've..........
If he had'nt left me
I cried the whole night you left me daddy
I used to wonder if i was the reason
Or was it because of mommy? ?
This I would never know.......
I wish i 'd find out someday....
Or Is she better than us? ? ?
Did she love you more than we do?
I longed for you every single day,
Wishing that you'd come back..
I saw there lying on his death bed
I wished to hugg him
But he had another princess
My heart bled and broken into pieces..
I saw regret in his eyes
Tears were falling on his cheek
It was too damn late to turn back
He died a broken Heart......
'Just a little mistake, daddy'
poignant longing and tender emotions you have some minor grammatical mistakes when you correct them i will rate this lovely poem cheers shimon
a touching verses concept..a wonderful tribute to a father.. Ency Bearis
10 Put together very well Similar experience excpt with my mom Know your pain -Brie
God forgive us all who have in so many ways shattered the lives of others .. Father forgive us for we knew not what we did
can relate with u dear...only the poet can create the magic of of even grief. 10+
beware of the Electra Syndrome, the tribute has many mixed emotions and is well presented,10 what about more poems cheers Shimon
Never regret the love you had for your father Mary, regardless of the circumstances I'm certain he loved you just as much. Why wouldn't he?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/21/2024 10:59:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A heart rendering composition from a young girl who has suffered more than a normal being. The piousness of the love for dad and the sullen departing has been traced so lucidly and artistically that it raises the piece into greater heights..Well done