Just A Little Poem by Linda Ori

Just A Little

Rating: 2.9


Come love me just a little
When I have a rainy day,
Come love me just a little
When my skies have turned to gray,
Come love me just a little
When there's nothing more to say -
Support me;

Come love me just a little
When I need your hand to hold,
Come love me just a little
When my sunny day turns cold,
Come love me just a little
When I feel I'm growing old -
Comfort me;

Come love me just a little
When I need to to see your face,
Come love me just a little
When the world is on my case,
Come love me just a little
When I need your warm embrace -
Understand me;

I'm not asking for the world,
I'm not asking for your soul -
I just need you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Not a member No 4 03 February 2007

The repeated line mechanism works to perfection in this Linda - and it's a first class, very fluid and seductive line too. Tender and romantic incantation. xx jim

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You want love now or what, Blondie? ! Make up your mind...You say you want a little love when you're old....so, what we supposed to do for the next 35 years, huh? Solid Write, MB'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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