Just A Thought Poem by Kagiso Mogale

Just A Thought

Rating: 5.0


I slept thinking last night
Houses wracked and people branded
Nobody wants to look back
All we care for is the rand

We've prided ourselves with bellies
That are forever filled with beer
Forgot about everything and everyone
Like we've never gone a day without bread
Was that the idea of 'changing the world'

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It was just a thought, It's not a poem. But I'm open to critisism...so feel free
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hello Kagiso! Really happy to welcome you aboard! Yes! We do talk about changing the world! But how many of us really swing into action? A point well raised through this thoughtful poem! well done!

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Aarifa Almas 20 April 2016

Your thoughts are very true and genuine.. Liked it.. Keep sharing

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Md Elias Uddin 14 February 2014

We've prided ourselves with bellies That are forever filled with beer Forgot about everything and everyone Like we've never gone a day without bread Was that the idea of 'changing the world' liked.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 February 2013

materialistic thought. All we care for is the rand. I enjoy it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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