Just An Arm Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Just An Arm

Rating: 5.0


It is good to draw lesson
It is equally important to mention
The inner bond with good relation
This is time it needs elevation

The sun had been source
Very bright and live force
That can not allow clouds
To come freely and surround

No one can block light
It is his right
Whole world draws full energy
That is wish of almighty too

Rainbow is just an arm
Coming out after rain storms
It has color with clear messages
It is liked in all the ages

Love and miss everything
That comes on the way for something
You may miss your dear ones and find
Little glimpse in all colors to look grand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

It is good to draw lesson It is equally important to mention

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

Rohani Daud likes this. Rohani Daud Lovely poem 10 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 April 2014

Re: Just an arm (Score: 1) by induce on Tuesday, April 29,2014 (03: 07: 30) Jadia, strong words, feeling as though elevation is encouraged here, so much thought surrounding an 'arm'... (no offence) ... I am going on imagery after reading. I felt I saw a mix of amazing angles, excellent use of wording, a solid poem that goes places. Keep it up, enjoyed. andye

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 10 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome shujat ahmed 4 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

Lovely Bart Philagree18 minutes ago Refreshing and invigorating! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 April 2014

How we play in thoughts Barry.............................17 minutes ago Never adding the sums.. of GREATNESS

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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