Just An Ordinary Bridge For Extraordinary Dreams Poem by adheez van der beanthz

under the legs of hypocrisy ...pushing my That Was Easy button! ; -) Very good Write. -Kelly.

my wish is raining lights

I'll suggest, a strange wish or a light bridge Even without a title, the poem is so good, thanks for sharing

All Uniting, A Joining At The Hips With Love For All. We Are Now One. The Merging In The Sky. Destroying All The Prejudice. Repairing The Divide. Conquering The Skies. Building A Immortal Bridge. Those are some names I've come with. Good Poem.

thanks to all for the input and i appreciate it but i decide to use this title because i think it represent the entire contents of my poem

your first stanza a delight to read, I have the same wish more than once. I would love to bridge my dreams sometimes. excellent thoughts.

And what an extraordinary dream this is. Good job Adheez. Thanks.

Oh how I really love this one Adheez. I feel your emotions in this poem in that you would like the world to be united as one. There should be no barriers between race, religion, national origin and other afflictions of society. If everyone take care of the things that matters in their corner of the world then it will bridge the divide. I would like very much for you to read my poem If I Could Fly. Very, very inspiring!

I believe the title should be whatever you want it to be, the author has their own dreams to construct

Its a beautiful poem and the new title is well chosen. Thanks for sharing.