Jay Aguiniga

Rookie - 63 Points (Scottsbluff Nebraska)

Just Don'T See That Anymore - Poem by Jay Aguiniga

Kids these days miss so much
Remember life's soft touch?
Sticks and stones,
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Comments about Just Don'T See That Anymore by Jay Aguiniga

  • Gold Star - 16,408 Points * Sunprincess * (7/1/2014 11:31:00 AM)

    ..........congratulations....and so nicely you penned this beautiful poem....yes the world is continuously changing....and I suppose we all must change with it or be left behind.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 162 Points Jayne Davies (7/1/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    A lovely poem. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (7/2/2012 12:24:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem, filled with magic of the heart and whispers of the soul. I love it very much! Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (7/1/2012 2:36:00 PM)

    Great nostalgic poem with a point.
    I thought the refrain worked effectively.
    Good write! (Report) Reply








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