Vasto Grom

Rookie - 10 Points (01/19/1990 / Houston, TX)

Just End It - Poem by Vasto Grom

I hate this place
I hate this whole race

One person is all it took
To make me want to end it all before I even finish writing my book

I really do despise this worthless life
.....I don't even care about making this rhyme anymore

All I want to do is leave this world behind
I'm so sick of all crap I take everyday

The woman I love wanted me to stop calling her a goddess and be more like myself
Now she won't talk to me for days and never answers my questions

God I hate this damn life
I wish I would get hit by a car and just die

This life is boring, I'm wracked with pain everyday, and my supposed friends are nothing but worthless, damn liars
Why doesn't god intervene right now and give me another heart attack

I swear I'll take death's hand this time
I'll go with him and find my damned peace

Let it all just end
Just let me have my peace


Comments about Just End It by Vasto Grom

  • Gold Star - 36,050 Points Chinedu Dike (3/5/2015 10:03:00 PM)

    A well articulated train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and penned from the heart. Every problem has a life span, so one must learn to take ugly situations in stride by keeping faith. Given adequate time bad situations eventually changes to favourable ones. It is an existential absurdity to conceive of life with problems. We must always remember that FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH. A lovely poem indeed. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,492 Points Pheko Motaung (3/5/2012 1:05:00 AM)

    Ah! This poem is wonderful! It has true emotion I totally identify with your sitation (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (3/4/2012 2:49:00 AM)

    This write is filled with so much anger and saddness, that's how life can go all the way to be very hard and unfair, but my for you is that keep strong, no one is powerfull than you in your nor anything can take you down in your own universe... The African son (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (3/4/2012 2:47:00 AM)

    This write is filled with so much anger and saddness, that's how life can go all the way to be very hard and unfair, but my for you is that keep strong, no one is powerfull than you in your nor anything can take you down in your own universe... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (3/4/2012 2:18:00 AM)

    A very powerful poem, packed with emotion.
    A great write.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    Secrets And Lies. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 4, 2012



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