Just Go Away Poem by JoAnn McGrath

Just Go Away

Rating: 5.0


Just Go Away


Indignant you sit

“Hot under the collar” as

Bad mood rising leads to

“Don’t go away mad…

…Just go away”…..you say

But we are going away

Slowly melting from your memory



21 April 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 11 May 2008

This certainly may be a short poem, but has big meanng. I sense a lot of hurt and anger here, one should possibly remove themselves fom the situation, analyse it, get help and try their best to work it out. Melvina

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 May 2008

Some times it's best to go your Separate ways, you've said all there is to say, it's time to call it a day... Andy xx 10

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David Harris 26 April 2008

Lil sis, a sad write so clearly expressed. I have a feeling I know the story behind this poem. Top marks and thanks for sharing it Lil sis. Big Bruv

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Thad Wilk 21 April 2008

A really capturing though sad write JoAnn and you have executed it very well! ! ! *10*! ! Best always, Friend Thad

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